标题: 面试英文自我介绍,请大家指正 [打印本页] 作者: 加糖的咖啡 时间: 2011-11-16 03:22 标题: 面试英文自我介绍,请大家指正 面试了几次,应聘单位都会要求做个英文自我介绍,我那蹩脚的英语总让我掉价不少,所以现在写个草稿请大家指正,希望能起到抛砖引玉的作用.
Self introduction
Good morning, my name is jack, I am glad to be here for this interview. now I will introduce myself briefly
I am 28 years old,born in Shanxi province . I graduated from Xi'an university of science&technology. my major is electronic information of science&technology .and I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2003. I spend most of my time on study,Ihave passed CET-6 . and I have acquired basic knowledge of my major during my school time. Since my graduation from the school three years ago, I have been employed by Delta as a quality assurence engineer .In Delta,I was mainly duty on dealing with customer complain,making preparation for customer audit and internal production line audit.Because I'm capable of more responsibilities, so I decided to change my job. One year later,I left Delta and worked for Foxconn as a quality engineer.I mainly duty is to design reliability test procedure,dispose abnormal matter happend in production line.I am also duty to orgnise and preside weekly quality routine meeting.Because I want to work for a company in which I can gain more knowledge. That is the reason why I come here to compete for this position.
I'm a good team player and I'm a person of great honesty to others. Also I am able to work under great pressure.
That’s all. Thank you for giving me the chance.
[ 本帖最后由 209casual0000 于 2007-1-26 22:10 编辑 ]作者: 所向无敌 时间: 2011-11-16 03:22
“Because I want to work for a company in which I can gain more knowledge. That is the reason why I come here to compete for this position.”
相对于其它所有的语法错误和文法过于平淡的问题，这句话更致命。
企业不是学校，老板不是老师，他们凭什么把知识经验传授给你呢？把你对这个问题的回答用英文写出来，取代上面段话吧。作者: 加糖的咖啡 时间: 2011-11-16 03:22
谢谢指点,这句删掉"knowledge"怎么样?另外请将具体语法错误和如何改正指出来我好改过,至于文法,我认为是面试的简短介绍,一般的就可以了,
说实在的,面试人员英语水平并不是很高,但他们就是口语流利一点而已作者: 多春鱼 时间: 2011-11-16 03:22
学习中 顶一下作者: 软件 时间: 2011-11-16 03:22
个人觉得,口语要简单为好,
I am glad to be here for this interview. now I will introduce myself briefly
这个有点多, I am glad to talk about myself,
个人建议,不一定好作者: 软件 时间: 2011-11-16 03:22
I spent a lot of time studying作者: 软件 时间: 2011-11-16 03:22
,可找一个模板,学习一下
